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Poetry Review: “My Father Perceived as a Vision of St. Francis” by Paula Meehan

Ireland, pound for pound, has created more great writers than any other county on earth, especially poets.

Irish poet Paula Meehan and I have one thing in common. We both lived for a while and went to school in Cheney, Washington. Paula was there for grad school at Eastern Washington University. I was there for elementary school at Beth Elementary a decade or two before she arrived there.

Here is a poem by Paula Meehan that is on my mind much these days.

Enjoy!

My Father Perceived as a Vision of St Francis

             for Brendan Kennelly

It was the piebald horse in next door’s garden
frightened me out of a dream
with her dawn whinny. I was back
in the boxroom of the house,
my brother’s room now,
full of ties and sweaters and secrets.
Bottles chinked on the doorstep,
the first bus pulled up to the stop.
The rest of the house slept

except for my father. I heard
him rake the ash from the grate,
plug in the kettle, hum a snatch of a tune.
Then he unlocked the back door
and stepped out into the garden.
Autumn was nearly done, the first frost
whitened the slates of the estate.
He was older than I had reckoned,
his hair completely silver,
and for the first time I saw the stoop
of his shoulder, saw that
his leg was stiff. What’s he at?
So early and still stars in the west?

They came then: birds
of every size, shape, colour; they came
from the hedges and shrubs,
from eaves and garden sheds,
from the industrial estate, outlying fields,
from Dubber Cross they came
and the ditches of the North Road.
The garden was a pandemonium
when my father threw up his hands
and tossed the crumbs to the air. The sun
cleared O’Reilly’s chimney
and he was suddenly radiant,
a perfect vision of St Francis,
made whole, made young again,
in a Finglas garden.

 

Listening with a pencil and my ear, these are the lines I marked:

for the first time I saw the stoop
of his shoulder, saw that
his leg was stiff. What’s he at?
So early and still stars in the west?

*  *  *  *  *  *

and he was suddenly radiant,
a perfect vision of St Francis,
made whole, made young again,
in a Finglas garden.

There is so much to like about this poem, about Meehan’s language which is at once evocative, reminiscent, nostalgic, and transfiguring. We hear in these lines echoes of Seamus Heaney’s wonderful poem about his father (“Digging”) and of a traditional Irish Catholicism. What we hear most though is a singular voice that is at the same time: unique, female, and rooted in the great tradition of Irish Poetry (Yeats, Kavanaugh, Heaney).

 

“Rathlin Island Shrine” (photo by m.a.h. hinton)

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